I have a nightmare on my hands

This is just page one of the article. Flaming mad I am.

I am so frustrated right now. I just edited one of my team member's articles and its so agonising to read the thing. I wanna bury myself. They say I do not bring in personal bias. I don't think I am letting personal bias cloud my judgement. Lets just say the main assigned focus did not turn out to be the main focus of the article.

It became ONE paragraph out of what? 5? 6? ONE! I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mad right now. The picture says it all. Marks in blue are editing done by me. I don't wanna type no more. Goodnight.
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